In these eyes

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You’ll see brown, and green.

Sometimes tears

Sometimes joy

Sometimes the crust left over from sleep

Sometimes bits of makeup, that I didn’t quite wash off

Sometimes you will see my mother

my father

My love for The Boy

Sometimes you will see pain

Sometimes, you will wonder if there is anything going on behind them, at all.

Sometimes you will wonder all of the things they hide

and what they show.

Because Niobe asked.

43 Responses to “In these eyes”

  1. Janet Says:

    Captivating.

  2. Amanda Says:

    Damn girl, you have some incredible symmetry. I’d like to see myself reflecting back at me. Reunion, STAT.

  3. meno Says:

    Your eyebrows are FABULOUS!

  4. niobe Says:

    Wow.

  5. Irish Gumbo Says:

    I second Niobe.

    I am always a sucker for lovely eyes. :)

  6. Fran Says:

    Lovely. And what great brows!!!

  7. Daisy Says:

    You movie starlet, you!

  8. Coast Rat Says:

    I see an incredibly sweet eye.

  9. Captain Steve Says:

    Dude. Seriously meticulous eyebrows. I am inspired to pluck like a madman later.

    Also, really pretty words.

  10. phd in yogurtry Says:

    and bloodshot occasionally? or maybe I’m projecting.

  11. Bridge Says:

    Perfection.

  12. Teri Says:

    Lovely words for sure, but seriously you have some pretty eyes.

  13. maggie, dammit Says:

    Your eyes are gorgeous, yes, but those EYEBROWS?! Damn, girl. I covet.

  14. tysdaddy Says:

    I see superbly sculpted eyebrows.

    I see now that maggie also mentioned then, so I feel I’m being redundant.

    But . . . DAMN! Can you take me to your pro next time . . . ?

  15. magpie Says:

    Yes, the eyebrows almost make me want to got out and find a groomer. You’re so lovely.

  16. bejewell Says:

    Stunning.

  17. Nutty Mummy Says:

    Fabulous eyes – fabulous eyebrows – fabulous you! :)

  18. paul Says:

    told you…. ;)

    i now have peter gabriel singing in my head….

  19. Angel Says:

    What pretty colors too! And Magpie is right, the eyebrows are the exact shape I keep aiming for but can never quite do.

  20. Painted Maypole Says:

    lovely, all of it

    but i’m truly impressed by your eyebrows!

  21. lovebabz Says:

    And they say Sister-FRIEND! :)

    Thinking about you Babe. ((HUGS))

  22. the mama bird diaries Says:

    i love the green and brown. beautiful.

  23. Angie [A Whole Lot of Nothing] Says:

    GORGEOUS! Great brow job.

    Thanks for reminding me I need to get in a wax.

  24. heather Says:

    Yes, and compassion and bravery.

  25. Kyla Says:

    Dude, your eyes are PERFECT.

  26. Cathy-wheresmydamnanswer Says:

    The eyes are very revealing – Yours eye is beautiful!!! (damn incredible brow too)

  27. Lisa Milton Says:

    Gorgeous. That’s all.

  28. Erin Says:

    Pretty eye. Do you have a match?

  29. hele Says:

    in your eyes i will also get to see the fluttering of your soul. from dark to light and all the shades of grey in between.

  30. vodkamom Says:

    so you have great eyes, big deal. Can you write?

    Of course we all know the answer to that. YES, YES, YES!!!!

  31. jaded Says:

    I could lose myself in the strans of brown and green.

  32. Rachel Says:

    Visiting from Niobe’s post. Your eyes are perfect, like they came out of an advertisement. I post my color here: http://raspberrychip.blogspot.com/2009/02/eyes.html

  33. Gypsy Says:

    Pretty.

    And those eyebrows should be in a museum. If there were museums for such things. Are there?

  34. Lilly Says:

    Fantastic poem, eyes, brows and lashes!

  35. Queen of the Mayhem Says:

    MAN….Gypsy took my comment! I was going to ask for the name and number of your eyebrow lady…I might need to make a trip just to get some help!

    Your eyes are lovely! (Except for the crust part….EWWWW!) :)

  36. we_be_toys Says:

    Nicely done!
    And I love the color of your eyes – they’re like a landscape with all the colors I can see in them!

  37. MamaGeek Says:

    If the eyes ARE the window to the soul, you are LOVELY inside and out.

  38. mamatulip Says:

    Wow.

    You have GORGEOUS eyes.

  39. Chicken And Cheese The Eyes Have It Says:

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  40. JCK Says:

    So gorgeous. Eyebrows and lashes to die for…

  41. chaotic joy Says:

    Oh my. What beautiful eyes you have, my dear.

  42. Jocelyn Says:

    I was actually just looking at that photo of you–uncropped, on your other page–and thinking how stunning you, and your eyes, are.

    Mine are bloodshot more than I’d like.

  43. Kevin Charnas Says:

    I want to LICK ‘em.

    I WANT TO LICK ‘EM, SISTER!!!

    LLLUUUUPPPTHTHTH!!!

    I know that’s gross. I don’t mean it. I just want to gently kiss your gorgeous eyes… closed, of course. But still… I want to gently kiss them, like the long lost brother to you that I am.

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